3 ideas for my film

my first idea
there would be a boy that gets bullied, the film would start of with him in school and he would be on his own because he had no friends, at lunch he would be on his own when the bully comes over and punches him because he just doesnt like him, then a teacher would come over and stop the fight, and they would stop fighting with the bully saying things like ill get you later.
after school the boy who gets bullied is walking home but he takes this short cut through some woods, the bully sees the boy and follows him, in the woods the bully starts shouting 'im going to get you' at the boy. then the bully starts chasing the boy, the boy trips on a stick and falls over when the bully gets to him he stands over him then a earth quake happens and the ground opens and the boys get swallowed into a big hole,

that would be the start of my film but if it continued there would be rain and other things that puts the kids at risk and at the end they would be found after 5 days missing and they would be friends because they helped each other survive

i cant have the ground opening up because i dont no how to do that but maybe the ending could be the earthquake so i could shake the camera and then the kids screaming .

the sounds would be music because the boy has is ipod in most of the time, the only time u hear people speak is when he gets punched in school because his headset falls out and when hes walking home because he thinks hes seeing things so he takes his headset out, then u would hear the bully

software- i dont need to no about any other programs all i need to do is add music and edit it so some parts quickly cut

there are only 2 main characters and 1 other character
kid
bully
teacher

titles, i would have the title shake, because of the earthquake then it would fall from its position and fall down to the bottom of the screen

show its a thriller- there will be quick cut senses when they fight in school and when the bully is chasing the boy

certificate- 12a, the film has violence in it but not blood and the hole film would be about them trying to survive

skills- when he's in school i will have that max-on-action technique when there fighting ill do the 180o rule, low to high angle when looking at the bully and high to low when looking at the boy

NOTES; because this film wouldn't contain anything scary the certificate would be a 12a. however kids don't want to see things that happen in real life like people getting bullied.

my second idea
my second idea would be of someone getting murdered, it would start of with you following the murder or looking through the murders eyes, anyway the murder would have his hood up so you wont no his identity.
anyway the murder will be walking around school then he would go into a class room with only 1 person in it, the victim, and they would have there backs turned to the murder he would sneak up and then the victim would jump then smile because they no the murder as a friend, u would then see the murder hold a knife up and about to stab her then it would end

the reason it stops before the murder is because it would look like terrible acting and its a 15 so there would have to be blood, there would be rock music or scary music when the murder is walking around school then it would go silent when he sees the victim and he sneaks up on them, then the victim would say something like, u scared me, what are you doing with a knife.

characters- there would only be 2, the reason there is no one else is because the victim is in detention so its after school when no students are around

genre-i would show this by having cuts from the murder walking and the victim in detention, and there could be a heart beat in the background or deep breathing or a loud noise every time it cuts

software- i dont need to no about any other programs all i need to do is add music and edit it so some parts quickly cut

title- it could show while the murder is walking and have loud fading noises when it changes text

skills- when he is walking around school, ill do max- on-action when he uses doors and when there talking do the 180o rule, low to high angle when u see the murder

certificate- 15- if it didnt end before he stabbed the victim, it would show blood and the film would have people getting murdered

my third idea


this will be a story of a boy who has nightmares and at the start it would be a dream but you dont no this yet, it would be him getting chased though some woods, but you dont see what's chasing him yet, i would add sounds that sound like a beast chasing him, the sounds would be a mix between twigs hes standing on breaking, ,his heartbeat and his breathing.
he would be getting chased and it would start to sound closer so he hides then hes just got his eyes closed and saying things like 'please god dont let it find me' in a scared voice, it stays as a close up of him while ur hearing all this beast noises loud because its close and then u see the shadow of the beast, next to the boy and then he wakes up and hes breathing deeply, the end

you could also see though the beast sees, and to show this it could be black and white or another effect and i could run with the camera while chasing the victim.

genre- quick cuts while hes getting chased by the beast.

certificate- 15, this is just an introduction into the beast and 1 of the characters, if the film continued it would show the beast killing and eating people so blood would be everywhere

title- the title gets claw marks though it breaking it up.

skills, max-on-action of him walking though woods, 180 degrees of the victim, always stay on 1 side of him, high to low when u see the boy, when he falls on the floor

characters- 1 you wont see the beast so i just need someone running

dialog- just the boy screaming help and god please help me.

sound, beast, heartbeat, breathing, twigs breaking,

software- i dont need to no about any other programs all i need to do is add music and edit it so some parts quickly cut







evaluation
idea 1, this scripts is way to long to get put in 3 minutes. another bad thing is it is aimed at 12a because its not scary but children do not want to pay and go see other children get bullied, this idea does not show its a thriller until the last parts

idea 2, people that have saw this idea think it is not interesting and it would be boring to watch someone walk around a school for 2 minutes.

idea 3, this is the one i am doing and people that have saw it agree it is the best one, .